On writing better

More people could stand to gain knowledge on the hard work that editors do in service to readers. Image found on The Daily Texan.

Everyone needs an editor.

I can assure you that for every story of a writer done wrong by an editor, there are at least three editors over in the corner raging and cursing a long list of writers who don’t spell-check or fact-check, don’t know versus and verses (and other homonym sets) mean different things and, worse yet, don’t take kindly to being edited.

Over the years I’ve dealt with just about every type of writer one could imagine. Back when I was on the night copy desk editing news stories, I was usually the one who dealt with a certain reporter because others didn’t want to; the writer rechecking his story after it had been line-edited annoyed those who just wanted to move copy. I didn’t mind, though, because the reporter just wanted to make sure that nothing that had been changed made the story incorrect. A particular turn of phrase wasn’t the worry; whether readers understood the story and got accurate information was. Very rarely did that reporter have to have a correction run. Writers like that (and I’ve worked with a few) are extremely conscientious and good to have on staff of a newspaper if you want to have a good reputation.

Another writer, on the other hand, was hostile to editing, and there was an unwritten directive that that particular writer was to be only lightly edited. That person had to run more corrections than most. Professional writers have the benefit of professional editors; it’s unwise to waste that resource.

Sometimes these errors are caused by hubris, and sometimes, especially in the last decade or so, due to personnel cuts in the newspaper industry (local and institutional knowledge are huge victims of outsourcing and AI). That’s when the really dumb errors come out because newswpapers are trying to do too much with too few staff members in too little time, which just gives more fuel to the people who claim the mainstream media is biased (in their view, apparently, the mistakes are intentional because of … blah, blah, we’re evil … or something). Image found on Distractify.

A good editor does more than just check grammar and spelling, but will push the writer to do better. On the news side, it’s important to make sure the writer didn’t bury the lede, has checked all facts, and has kept his or her opinion out of the story. On the opinion side, there’s more leeway, but it should still be clear when the writer is expressing opinion, especially if they write reported opinion, as John Brummett does. Fact-checking is no less important here in opinion than in news, though that might be difficult to see if you read too many hyperpartisan pundits who are syndicated nationally.

We don’t do these jobs for our amusement (though it happens; we’re a weird lot sometimes), but to serve readers and cast the writer in the best possible light. We’re not the enemy, but rather your odd friend who’ll probably be off in a room with your cat if you invite them to a party (I know it’s not just me). In that vein, some tips for writing from an editor:

What really should be mascot for copy editors, the comma butterfly.

✍️ Be open to editing.

No one’s work is perfect, so if you send something to a newspaper with the directive not to edit it (or not to edit it without approval of every edit, which with short staffs is unlikely to happen), odds are it won’t be printed. I can’t think of any submission over the nearly 12 years I’ve been on the opinion side of things that didn’t improve with editing (though I’m sure some letter-writers would disagree), even something as simple as a comma in the right place. (Remember, commas save lives: Let’s eat Grandma! OR Let’s eat, Grandma!)

👀 Read what you wrote, put it away, then don’t look at it again for a minimum of six hours.

If you don’t have an editor friend and you’re not on deadline, this trick helps you see what you wrote with an at-least-somewhat fresh set of eyes, which means you’re likely to catch something that needs correcting.

I typically write my column on Monday afternoon, then don’t look at it again till after I’ve edited Rex Nelson’s column the next day. I’ve been able to find some significant errors that way, as well as fine-tune some of the writing. Plus, at least one if not two other editors read through it as well. Sure, we’ll still miss things occasionally, but that’s life. Of course, I also find things on later reading when I’m working on the blog, and a few times they’ve been significant enough that I’ve called or messaged a designer to fix them before the state deadline. (While we’re mostly online, we do the paper as a replica edition that looks like the traditional layout; we do publish a limited number of physical copies as well as the Sunday edition, so that design aspect and its deadlines haven’t gone away.)

I need to concentrate when I edit, which is why I don’t play music or TV when I edit (which means the nights I work late at home, for the paper or this blog, I don’t turn on streaming till I’m done). Why? Because I tend to sing along or, if it’s a movie I’ve seen before and love, recite the dialogue … watching most Disney movie musicals or “Young Frankenstein” or “Princess Bride” with me can be an adventure. Image found on ThinkWritten.

👩‍🏫 Brush up on your grammar and word use.

Editors don’t expect a perfect piece to come to them, but something riddled with spelling errors (spellchecked or not; spellcheck typically doesn’t catch correctly spelled words that are incorrect in usage, but please, at minimum, spellcheck the damn thing!), grammar errors such as wrong punctuation or misplaced modifiers (a misplaced modifier can cause more trouble than a dangling participle, such as driving around with deceased relatives; lord, the stories I could tell) and odd spacing (spaces before punctuation, line breaks where they shouldn’t be [don’t do line returns on an iPad if you’re writing a letter, please, because the software does them automatically], etc.) tells the editor you don’t really care. Clean up those issues before you submit something to give yourself a better chance of being published.

Even the people who turn in the cleanest copy slip sometimes, so never think your work is perfected. Editors like me really appreciate the kind of writer that knows that.

I’ve seen worse than this, including pieces that had not a single paragraph that didn’t need to be revised (and that were supposedly final drafts). Image found on Purdue Global Academic Success and Writing Resource Center and Blog.

🪓 Kill your darlings.

No, this has nothing to do with abortion, and if you think it does, whoa, are you in the wrong place. This is advice that is heard more often by fiction writers, a directive to get rid of unnecessary storylines, characters, etc., for the story’s own good. But all writers, fiction and nonfiction, have little habits in our writing that can hold it back, and we should be willing to sacrifice them for the greater good. I’m a little too enamored of parentheticals (duh, but c’mon, they’re fun and useful, especially since there’s no actual sarcasm font … yet). Some writers have some phrase they consider their trademark, or a favorite quote or novel excerpt they like to trot out. But there are times when the reader gets to one of those darlings and says, “Oh, lord, not this again.”

Literary devices are very useful, but when writers lean on them too much, it makes it a slog to get through whatever they’ve written, and it all starts to sound the same. For example, use alliteration sparingly; I’ve been guilty of that, but I tend to use it mostly in two- to three-word headlines. Whole paragraphs of it … ugh, painful … might remind the reader of Peter Piper and his peck of pickled peppers (don’t get me started on this, because a peck is measure of dry volume …). Moderation goes a long way. The same thing goes for using cliches; if you just have to use them, which you don’t really, more than likely, use them in an unexpected way and, still, sparingly.

Unless it’s fake “flavored” chocolate. Good stuff only! Image found on Amazon.

✂️ Make the cut.

More than likely, you have a lot of unnecessary words, phrases and sentences in your writing, which is one more reason for giving yourself at least a few hours before looking at it again. Maybe you’re repeating yourself. Maybe you’re over-writing in an effort to fill space or to make yourself sound more lofty than you are. When writing opinion for a newspaper, for example, be yourself, and write conversationally; leave the stiffness for specific styles like business communication or literary writing. You don’t need to use every adjective and adverb, or pepper your writing with $10 words, especially if you’re writing for something with limitations on the number of words. A letter to the editor or a guest column is not your master’s thesis or that grade-school essay on what you did over the summer. Fill the space with useful information, not rhetorical flourishes that do little but add to the word count; if they don’t advance your argument in the space given, cut them.

🗣️ Read your writing out loud.

This would be the “sounds right” rule, and it’s one I learned when I was studying broadcast news. I look at writing as if it’s a road: If it sounds natural and flows smoothly as you’re reading it, that’s good; if something makes you stumble, you’ve hit a pothole, which means it might need a rewrite.

Sort of like my life sometimes.

Our set wasn’t nearly this nice when I was at ASU, but ours was donated by KATV in Little Rock. Perhaps the best thing I learned while doing the Broadcast News semester was that reading scripts out loud beforehand really helped you see where the trouble spots were in copy. Image found on ASU-TV at Arkansas State University.


Last week I posted something on Facebook about having tried Trader Joe’s arepas con queso, and inadvertently started a big discussion about the merits of sugar in some things. I’m of the school that doesn’t like sugar in cornbread or savory arepas … arepas meant to be sweet (I really want to try chocolate arepas or the caramelized apple ones from the site where I got my basic cheese arepa recipe) and corn muffins are another matter entirely.

But there are more things that bug people in certain areas about food than that. I’d love to hear from you on what food or kitchen/eating habit lets you know someone isn’t from around here (wherever you are). If you’re in the American South, do they put sugar in cornbread or (gasp) put cast-iron skillets in the dishwasher? Do they grimace at the mention of red-eye gravy or wilted lettuce? Do they, God forbid, serve unsweet tea? (I don’t drink iced tea at all anymore, after a bad experience with sun tea in my teens, but I’m still Southern, by God.) Let me know at blooper@adgnewsroom.com or by commenting down below, and I may quote you in a future column.

Charlie contemplates how a Southerner would prepare that damn robin out in the yard, and if it would taste like chicken. Charlie loves chicken.